“once i submit the career project would i be passing your class?”
But WHY does this student think an email like this is okay to send?
Hi (Student Name)
Thank you for your inquiry regarding your grade. A few things here for learning purposes. When asking someone who is supporting you and working hard to motivate you, write a more professional email. Perhaps something like this:
Hi Mr. H,
Thank you for supporting me and working on my behalf to make sure I learn and pass your class. I wanted to know when I turn in my Career Cluster Project assignment, would that improve my grade to be passing? I ask because I am concerned for my grade and learning the material.
Thank you,
(Student Name)
This will help you with communication with any teacher or more importantly any professional you connect with. Otherwise, your email comes off crass and uncaring for all involved. Just a business tip here as you are learning and growing.